Sunday, November 18, 2012

the first chapter of the story #1

hey there, this is one of my stories but the first to be published and i hope you'll like it, it's passed on a true story but i've changed some and added some and cancelled some;Pp  please leave a comment so i know your opinion, here or via http://ask.fm/AnonymousBloggerNov16
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Hessa: I knew it, happy endings don’t work for me ;'(


Soud Al …..  had the most beautiful wife, shahad Al…… and they have:
Abdulaziz, the oldest sun "elbecher" 22 years old, then abdulmehsen 21 years old, then aljawhara 18 years old, than Hessa 16 years old and "elje3da" the spoiled one of course abdulwahab 13 years old.

Now from the beginning, soud has 3 bothers and 5 sisters, while Shahad has 2 brothers and 5 sisters as well. Soud and Shahad got married when he was 23 and she was 18!!! Yes they were in LOVE <3
They lived In the family house in shuwaikh, with soud's father "Fahad" and his Lebanese mother "Nadeen" and 2 of his brothers and his youngest sister.
His big brother "hamad" has his own house in Qurtuba, and his brother "ahmad" "ely a9ghar mn soud 3la 6oul" was still studying in America with "mohamad" his youngest brother. His sister "Nadia" was in college.

Friday night, as usual, soud takes Shahad "his wife", his two daughters "aljawhara and Hessa" and his youngest son "abdulwahab" to the cinema, shopping and dinner. But this day Shahad felt that there's something wrong, and from experience, if she felt something it means that something bad really bad gonna happens!!
Two years ago abdulmehsen's first day driving with a license had a car accident and his elbow got damaged, until now he can not bend his arm nor stretch it well.
Back to Shahad, she said to soud: soud galbi nagheznii!! I feel something I don’t know what
Soud: mako shy inshallah latkhar3eena yuba mako ela el3afya inshallah.
Shahad: soud welly e3afeek call abdulaziz and abdulmehsen check on them and ask them to be careful for me please
Soud: mn 3younii I'll call them both now and I'll put it on speaker so you can hear their voice.
"Soud is calling abdulmehsen"
Abdulmehsen: aloo hala yuba
Soud: hala feek, where are you?
Abdulmehsen: why? Is everything ok?
"Soud covers the phone and say: shefty shloon mafeeh shy khara3nah 3al fathy"
Soud: la mafee shy bs omik tabe te6aman 3alaik
Abdulmehsen: I'm at Saleh Al…..'s Duwaneyah , I'll be home in an hour or two don't worry mom I'm not driving like I used to and I'm always wearing the seat belt
Shahad: Allah y7afthikk inshallah w ebaleghni feek m3rs
Abdulmehsen: hhhhhh inshallah yalla bbye
Shahad and soud: bbye
Shahad: yalla soud bser3a call abdulaziz
Soud: ya3nii mako fayda feech lazim enkhare3 elkel yala terta7ain
Hessa: baba plz just call him, once she hears his voice she can rest!
Soud: ok ok yalfaheema I'll call him
"Soud calling abdulmehsen but abdulmehsen's phone is OFF"
Shahad: Yuma weldy akhaf feeh shy
Soud: shfeech maybe his phone is out of charge, or he's in somewhere out of service!! Don't rush jumping into conclusion mozain 3ala 97tich
"Shahad is crying w matadre a9lan what was soud saying"
Shahad: plz soud call one of his friends ohwa galy enah 6ali3 with Nasser plz call him
Soud: OK!
"Nasser is abdulaziz's best friend from high school, they went to the same college, and now they work together at soud's company"
"Soud's calling Nasser but he's not answering"
He try calling for the second, the third time, before hanging up he picked it up
Nasser: aloooh 3amiiiii el7aaggggg
Shahad: Yuma weldiii shfeeeehhhhhhh
Soud: Nasser shfeek tekalam abdulaziz feeh shy??????????//
Nasser: he had a car accident and and and and and……………..
Shahad:yuuuummmmaaaaaaaa wellddiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…………………

What happened to abdulaziz?? Is he died??
What do you think of my first post? Do you like it?

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