Monday, November 26, 2012

the seventh chapter of the story #7

[Ali took bader's mobile w bsr3a edawer elchat mtlahef eshouf kalemat'ha w 9ourat'ha w shaf her PM w shloun kalemat bader estanas shway
Bader: ta3awath mn blees w emsh ma3ay elsayara khal adeg akalemha w enshouf she9eer
Ali and bader kept driving and calling Hessa, but she was crying she couldn't answer bader]



In the tenth time, she answered:
Hessa: na3am? "Screaming"
Bader: Hessa shfeech?????
 Hessa: bader shloun ali now???? "crying and talking eb 9out'ha elly feeh ba7a tethba7 ali"
The phone was on speaker
Ali: ya ba3ad 6uwayef ali yarou7 ali
He removed the speaker
Hessa cried more after those words, that when she knew that she's madly in love with him
Ali: hesso yala 3ad 7abeebty 3ashani w ghalaty 3endich stop crying w mes7y dmou3ich tra ghaleen 3alay
He was smiling the whole time, he was extremely happy!! 7as ena rou7ah radatlaaa
Hessa: ali
Ali: 3youn ali
Hessa: wallah etha hadaitnee mara thanya matloum ela nafsik fahem!!
Ali: ana maynoun 3ashan asaweeha!!
Hessa: ee ta3adal
Ali: agoul madry meno elly last time kan msaweely delete w elyoum gayel enah youmah mn ghairi awnas
Hessa: wenta kelshy et9adga!! Knt atghashmar 3adii ya3nee mo 9ejj ouf 3alaik
Bader: mabrouk ya3ersan, bs 3ad ra9eedy latkhal9ounah
Ali and Hessa laughed
Ali: yalla hassona I'll add you now enkamel suwalif layethba7nee hal je39
Hessa: LOOOL ok yalla waiting, bbye
Ali: bbye
Hak bs lat'thelna
Bader: a7!! Chethy etkalemnee ana elsharha 3alay elly dagait 3alaiha w 9ala7tkoum tawa knt sh7alatik mayet 3alay
Ali: 3ad maskeen enta wallah ehya shakelha et7ebnee ba3ad, 9a7?????
Bader: wallah ana chethy 7as ba3ad!!
Ali: yaraabbbbbbbbb " w refa3 eeda w gam yad3ii"
Ali took hessa's pin from bader and re-added her, she accepted him 3ala 6oul, shafat his PM
Hessa: aliiii
Ali: yarou7aahhh taw manawar
Hessa: meta 7a6ait halPM?
Ali: awal masawaitlich delete
Hessa: 7ata ana ;(
Ali: Hessa agoulich shy w matez3eleen? W etha ma3jebech 3adi molazim etaghayar shy ana rathy
Hessa: la mara7 az3al, yuma sheno fee??
Ali: ana elyoum 7asait eni khasartich forever, which made me regret not telling you the truth about how I feel about you….HESSA ILOVEYOU




What do you think was hessa's reaction?
Will she tell him that she loves him too?
Or will she get mad and delete him becuz she's not that type of girls?


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Sunday, November 25, 2012

the sixth chapter of the story #6

Hey guys im so so sorry eni ta'akhart 3alaikom wallah my teitter account got suspended, qnd im still working on it, my laptop has a virus emkhaly elscreen feeha 6 screens 9ghar, fa sam7ouni etha fe badleyat bs ana ga3da akteb mn ghair ma ashouf L, sorry, and I MISS YOU A LOT!!!<3


  
[Fahad kept thinking of a way to find out what's wrong with his brother, w akeed ya eb balah bader!!
He called him 3ala 6oul.]

Bader: hala wallah men wain 6al3a elshams elyoum zain wallah 3endik raqmee lama el7een la7tha la7tha t3aref esmii???
Fahad: LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
Allah ykhes bleesik bdair matyouz mn suwalfik yuba mawahaltnee 7ata asalim!!
Bader: hehehe, ee elsalam
Fahad: wa3alaikom elsalam
Bader: shlounik shakhbarik sheldenya feek?
Fahad: mohatha elmohim
Bader: Ha;/
Fahad: ee ana dag 3alaik abeek etshoufly ali shfeeh!! Khangeta el3abra w 7aiilll met'thayeg w bs sa'altah shfeeh nzala dam3etah w 9arakh 3alay w gam w dash el7amam w sakera 3ala rou7ah!!
Bader: olah kel hatha 9ayer eb ali w ana madry!!! 3a6nee degayeg w ashouf shfeeh w aredlik khabar
Fahad: ee wellyt e3afeek tra ana kelsh wala ashoufah chethy!!
Bader: ee wallah hatha ali elly eltha7ka matfaregaa!!!
Yalla yalla khal ashouf w aredlik khabar
Fahad: yallah bye
Bader: bye
Bader hanged up the phone and kept thinking what's wrong!!! Why didn't he tell me!!!
Dash 3ala his BBM w shaf Ali's PM w hessa's PM in the Updates wara ba3ath w garahum and he was shocked he felt that the problem is about Hessa
Bader to himself: laykoun galaha enah e7ebha!!!!!
La la ma3teqed ekoun sawaha!!
Bader & Ali's Chat On BBM:
Bader: PING!!
PING!!
PING!!
Ali: ?
Bader: wainik?
Ali: on Friday, wain akoun?
Bader: ok ana yayik abeek eb shaghla 5 min w akoun 3endik
Ali: don't
Bader: ooh ohh wallah ena Hessa 3alemetik English 3adel shaklah en3ewa elsanik menha;p
Ali: k.
Bader: ali shfeek tkalemnee chethy?
Ali: nothing, brb
Bader: la la lezoum abalegh Hessa wayed ta7asant w 9ert etkalem elkel mo bs ehya English
Ali: k
Bader: ali ana 5 min w akoun 3endik J
Ali read that but he couldn't replay with a thing, t3arfoun lama tabde tghoureg 3younkom w t9eroun matshoufoun? Ee ali kanat hathy 7altah, 7as enah ebyekhteneg, ghasal wayha w ta3awath mn blees w 6ala3 mn el7amam w 3ala 6oul ra7 bara wala 3abar fahad elly ga3ed yan6erah kan!!
Wagaf bel7oush w refa3 rasa lelsema w tenafas 7ail w gam yad3e w 3younah tedma3 bs mn ghair 9out, tam wagef chethy w fahad e6el 3alaih mn eldereesha w ekalim bader w egoulah w bader days lama we9alah dash 3ala 6oul el7oush!!

Gabel ma fahad ered edeg 3ala bader, bader dash 3ala Hessa BBM:
Bader: Hessa
Hessa: hala
Bader: shfeech?
Hessa: wala shy
Bader: ooh ooh enty 9erty tkalmeeny 3arabi w ali ekalemni English lahaldaraja entaw wayed met'athreen eb ba3at
Hessa: k
Bader: Hessa gouleely sh9ayer bainkom tra wallah bader dag 3alay egouly ena ali 6oul elmuda ga3ed w khangeta el3abra w 3younah tedma3!!
Hessa read that but couldn't say a word, she ran upstairs and cried.. nesait agolokom ena on Friday elzwara eb bait Hessa "ahl oboha" Hessa kanat 6oul elyoum et7awel etlahy rou7ha 3ashan matfaker eb ali bs lama kalamha bader 7assat enha shkether fagdeta w mogadra tet7amal za3alah 3alaiha.
Bader arrived, nezal w dash lega ali chethy…
Bader: ALI "in a very loud voice"
Ali shaf bader w rekath w lamaahhhh w tam yabchii methel elyahel!!
Bader: aliii yaba3ad ahly goulyyy shfeeeekkkkkkk???? "his voice was hesitating cuz to bader, ali was his soulmate, more than a friend or a brother!!"
Ali: a7ebha wallah a7ebha abeeehaa goulaha!!! "crying"
Bader: ana 7assait ena elsalfa feeha Hessa, sheno sh9ayer enta geltlaha enik t7ebha?
Ali: yaraaiittttt "he's wiping his tears"
Bader: 3aya??!!
Ali: e7na mn ams met'hawsheen w elyoum lama te9ala7na sa'alt'ha shsawaity ya7mara mn waray bs la'ani gltlaha ya7mara galatly kan a7la youm eb 7ayaty estanast w gazait w knt 7adee mestansa chan agoulaha inshallah doum mestansa w men hal7achi w allah ewafgich w bye w mesa7t'ha
Bader: na3am???????????? Lish???///
Ali: wallah yabdair 7assait eb 7arga eb galbi matetkhayalhaaa "he started crying again"
Bader: la laa latred tabchii shfeel chenik yahel wain 3laiwi elrayal!! "kan ga3ed egoul hal7achy mn kether ma ohwa emga6e3 galba w mo3aref yet9araf awal mara eshoufa chethy!! 7ata lama te6alegaw his parent kan aqwa mn chethy!!"
Latkhaf ana ra7 a9ale7koum nafs kelmara
Ali: la bs khala9 ana mabee athayeg'ha khalha bedamha mn ghairii mestansa ana bs hatha elly abeeh, bs abeek et6amenee 3alaiha wallah a7ebha w meshtag laha;(
Bader: enta hay!! Shga3ed etgoul!! Mno elly mestanes mn ghairik matadre sh9ar feeha ent!! Hak shoufha shlatba PM w shloun etred 3alay w ana akalemha 3anik!!
Ali khatha mobile bader w bsr3a edawer elchat mtlahef eshouf kalemat'ha w 9ourat'ha w shaf her PM w shloun kalemat bader estanas shway
Bader: ta3awath mn blees w emsh ma3ay elsayara khal adeg akalemha w enshouf she9eer
Ali and bader kept driving and calling Hessa, but she was crying she couldn't answer bader .

What will happen to Hessa and ali?
Will she answer bader?
Will ali move on in his life without her?
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Friday, November 23, 2012

the fifth chapter of the story #5

[Ali: ….
Akeed kan a7la youm eb7ayatich?
Hessa: eeeee akeedain ba3ad
Ali: inshallah doum halwanasa, allah ewafgich, bye
"DELETE"]


Yes he deleted her, which shows how much he loves her!!! He gets hurt by a silly joke from her cuz to him she was everything.
Hessa: a77! Hatha shfeeeh 9adag!!! Ouff 3alaihhhh
Hessa's PM is changed into:
!!</3الحبايب راحوا والدنيا سودت في عيني
Ali's PM is changed into:
!!</3 اتعبت قلبي ليتك تحس ليتك
Ali 9akat feeh eldenya, 7as enah halmara khesar 7ob 7ayatah gabel maye3teref laha feh, qe9at 7obah entahat qabel matebtedee!!!
Ali"to himself": ana elghal6an astahal!! 7abait ensana 3umrha ma7abatnee wala ra7 tfaker feeni!!
He was so close to tears and all of that happened after his brother fahad came, his father was watching the TV and he fall asleep on the couch.
Ali khnegeta el3abra, fahad and ali had a very close relationship becuz mako wayed farg bel3umur binhum, sentain.
Fahad: ali, shfeek?
Ali: nothing "he was trying to avoid looking at fahad 3ashan mayshouf 3younah shloon matrousa beldmou3, he was pretending that he was playing or texting someone on his mobile"
Fahad: 3laiwi t3alemnee feek!! Ylla gouly shfeek??
Fahad walked towards ali and he sat on the floor infront of him and he held his face and looked in his eyes which made ali's tears fall.
Ali: geltlik mafeeny shy matefham!!!
Ali ran to the bathroom and shut the door after him in a very aggressive way which waked 7mod up frightened.
7mod: shfeekom???????:O
Fahad: mafeena shy yuba smila 3alaik erja3 nam
7mod: sheno hal9out 3ayal?
Fahad: mako shy bs ali 9ak elbab
7mod: ok goulah shway shway shda3wah
Fahad: inshallah yuba enta bas nam khala9

Fahad kept thinking of a way to find out what's wrong with his brother, w akeed ya eb balah bader!!
He called him 3ala 6oul.


Does bader know?
Did Hessa tell him or ali?
Could bader help fahad?
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Thursday, November 22, 2012

the fourth chapter of the strory #4

[Hessa and ali slept this night without saying GN or anything at all, both put the sleeping face in their status, but non did really sleep, they kept thinking for hours………]

It's time for 9alat aljem3a, ali took off the sleeping face, so she did, he went to the mosque in front of his father's house..
[Ali's parent aren’t together since he was in kindergarten, he has 3 brothers older than him, the biggest is m7amad, than 7amad, than fahad,  than ali, their father's name is 7mod, their mother's name is wafa'a, so ali visit his father every two to three Fridays ]
This time his prayer were different, he usually prayers for god to keep his mom, dad, brothers and all his family and friends b9e7a w 3afya, but this time he kept repeating one thing "Ya Rab Takteblii Hessa men ne9ebee, adry ena oboha mara7 yertha eb wa7id weld Al… bs ya rabb wallah enii ra7 akhaf 3alaiha w a9onha w as3edhaa yaa raabbb ektebha lee bel7alal"

Stop, I won't tell you what happened after that until I inform you with everyone's routine for the past days….

Lets start with soud, he spend his day at his company with abdulmehsen, then he come home, he eat, watch the TV with his wif and juju for 1 or 2 hours and then he go to his room and think of abdulaziz until he fall asleep, Shahad wakes up everyone in the morning and every time she passes by abdulaziz's room tad3eela w tanzel dam3at'ha, when everyone leaves she enters abdulaziz's room and re-arrange his closet and she sniff his leftovers perfume from his clothes and his favorite dehen oud from his dishdasha and qetra, she keeps remembering her life with him until it's time for althuhur prayer, she pray in her room and wait in the living room for everyone to come, so they can have launch together, abdulmehsen fake a smile the whole time in his dad's company, cuz he and abdulaziz were waiting for the day that they work together in the same place!! When he finish, he call his friends and see if one of them is free to go out, he spend the rest of the day out until it's time for sleep, and he sleeps in abdulaziz's room, aljawhara in the morning until the afternoon are in her college, then at home for launch, than out with her two friends shopping and talking at a coffee shop till the clock ticks at 10 when she has to be at home, while abdulwahab spend him time from 8 till 2 in his school, launch at home, PS3 at his duwaneya with his friends till it's 7 o'clock, and that’s when he changes his clothes and gets ready to go out and have fun till it 10 and he comes back home.
Hessa spend he morning hours at her high school, then launch with her family, bbming for minutes to check on ali, do her homework and she get prepared for tmws lessons and exam if she has one, than she go back to her bbm and chat with ali and some of her close friends and maybe go out with her mom or her friends.

Lets get back now to ali and his prayer, when he finished praying his father asked him: lish 6awalt belsejoud elyoum? 7mod kan mestaghreb from his son ali it was the first time.
Ali: la bs knt ga3ed ad3ee "with a hesitating voice"
7mod: tad3ee 7g mno?
Ali: aaa 7g bader yuba
7mod: lish shfeeh?
Ali: still eloum nafsa 3ala wafat omah maskeen
7mod: eeh maskeen allah egaweeh inshallah
Ali: inshallah
They went to his house, but ali was distracted all day!! He kept checking his bbm every 2 seconds, his father noticed that but he didn't want to bother him, Hessa spent the whole day in the same condition of ali, finally it's bed time, and they both couldn’t stand not talking to each other anymore and they both entered the chat and send: .
Yes a full stop only!! 3ala 6oul 9ar ® la'anhum ma3a ba3ath dazaw, they laughed and they both apologized to one another
Ali: LOOOOOL Hessa: hehehehe
Ali: walaht 3ala haltha7ka ""yarab meta eye elwagt elly agdar agoulaha A7BICH!!"
Hessa: me too:$
Ali: 6a3aw elly teste7iiii <3.<3
Hessa: youuzzz;$
Ali: enzain ya7mara wallah lich wa7sha shlounich???? Shsawaity men waray
Hessa: :O
Ana 7mara !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Walah enik maleeeeeeeeeeeeeqqqqqq w mateste7y hatha yezay elly sama7tik w enta matestahal!!!!!!
Wallah ana re7t q gazait w estanast kan a7la youm eb 7ayaty!!!:)
Ali: ….
Akeed kan a7la youm eb7ayatich?
Hessa: eeeee akeedain ba3ad
Ali: inshallah doum halwanasa, allah ewafgich, bye
"DELETE"

Why did he delete her???
Since when their relationship is that shallow and what made him delete her!! They are used o teasing each other like children!!


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Wednesday, November 21, 2012

the third chapter of the story #3

[Hessa's BBM]
Ali: Where are you?
Hessa: how many times should I say I'm at the wedding!!
Ali: I know that I meant, wainich bara 3nd elseyayeer wala still dakhel el 9ala?
Hessa: no we are outside waiting for our car, but why?
Ali: ok good
Hessa: what is good? Shfeek?
Ali: look inside the black Silverado in front of you;$
Hessa: why??!!:/
O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oohh!!
Shyaybeeekkkk????????/
Maynoouuunnnnn balla a7add shafek!
Ali: yait ashouf elgumar
Ee maynoun tawich t3arfeeny
W etha shafounii so! Ana lakalamtich wala shy! Bs mu3jab
Loool
La la lat9adgeen rou7ich ana cheny yay akhith omi ekhty ay a7ad kho elnas shdarahum!
Hessa: maynoun wallah!! Enzain yala emsh bser3aa
Ali: enzain yal jaikara wallah ta7asaft eni yait 6ala3ty tlaw3een elchabd ;s
Hessa: ..
Ali: wai3 wai3 ba9ekech delete ana ma3endy banat jeyaker lahaldaraja ;s
Hessa: bbye
[ She deleted him]
She felt a burn in her heart, didn’t know why! Ya3nee if bader was the one who said that, she would fight with him, even ali, that what they used o do!! But this time she wanted to hear something different from him, something that she doesn’t want to hear it from anyone but him!! WHY? NO ANSWER YET

Ali "saying to himself": aa77 elchalba 9akatnee delete!! Shfeeha hathyy yanatt w 9adegaattt enha jaikaara w eni bamsa7ha!!! Sh'hal dala3 elly nezal 3alaiha faj'aa!! " he was looking at her, but she kept looking away until their car arrived and she entered it…
[Ali's BBM]
Ali: bdair
PING!!
PING!!
Bader: haaaa
W wai3aa shtabee
Ali: wai3a toye3ek! 3a6nee pin Hessa bser3aa
Bader: lish ehya mo3endik?
Ali: bala as'ela zayda w 3a6nee yah mofatheelik el7een
Bader: manee ma36eek ela lama tgoulii shloon
Ali: 3a6nee yah w bs akhali9 mnha agoulik kl shy bs yallaaa
Bader: wait I'll ask her first

[Bader's BBM]
Bader: Hessa
Hessa: hala
"she answered him 3ala 6oul, cuz she was waiting for something to happen"
Bader: ali mthaygich bshay? Za3elich menee menaak?
Hessa: lish tgoul chethy?
Bader: cuz he's asking for your pin, which means you've deleted him
Hessa: yes I did
Bader: why?
Hessa: faj'a yaynii 3nd el3rs w shafnii w ana 3nd elsayara w egoulii enii jaikara w yaraita mayah ………."she told him everything happened"
Bader: ahaa, Hessa ana weyah 6oul 3umurna n6africh chethy bs lish hal mara 9adagty aw za3alty?
Hessa: madry ;/
Bader: 9adgeeny momen 9ejaa wallah
Hessa: adry bs kent abeeh yet'adab shway
Bader: ya3nee etha ana sawait chethy bet9ekeeny delete :O
Hessa: LOOOL, la'aaa ;p
Bader: ashwa ;p
Enzain oo hatha ga3ed e7n yaby your pin a36eeeh?
Hessa: ee 3a6ah bs awal shy khar3ah golah marethat w 7adha m3a9ba shouf shegoul ;p
Bader: LOOOOL yal mujrema!!
Hessa: ohwa mo a7sn menee wallah!!
Bader: 9a7 9a7, yalla wait shway

Bader: 3alawi
Ali: haa basher
Bader: morathya
7adha za3lana w m3a9baa
Ali: laa bdaiir welly 3afeeekkk wallaahhh magdaarrr abeehaa
Bader: sheno asawee morathya!
Ali: maykhalif enta 3a6nee her pin w ana ra7 aratheeha wallah tra ana a7ebhaaa
Bader: sheno???????? Enta t7ebhaa!!!!!!!!
"Ali: opss ana shgelt X_X"
Ali: bader 3a6nee her pin

Bader: Hessa
Hessa: hala sh9ar?
Laykoon khara3ta wayed
Tra ma artha 3alaih
Bs 3a6ah piny I missed him already
Bader: okik
Hessa: mara7 tgouli sh9ar?
Bader: khaleeh ohwa egoulich sh9ar
Hessa: okik ;$

"bader gave ali hessa's pin, he re-added her and she accepted him"
She was already in her way back home, he thought that bader told her what he said, so he was really shy and didn’t know what to say after that word, she forgave him in the same moment that bader talked to her about him;p  so she started the talk with:
Hessa: enta shgelt 7g bader ;$
Ali: mageltla shy

Ali: bdair enta geltlaha yal 7aywaannn
Bader: mageltlaha shy!!!!!!
Sa'alatnee sh9ar geltlaha khaly ali egoulich!!
Ali: ee ashwaaaaaaaa
Mashkour raya7tnee allah eray7ik
Bader: lish enta mara7 tgolaha?
Ali: no way agolaha
Bader: lish?
Ali: etha geltlaha malek amal tertha hatha awalan w thaneyan mara7 tertha tkalemnee 3ugubha klsh, w ana yakhouk ta3alaqt feeha wayed w ta3awadt 3ala wejoudha
Bader: umm ok kaifik

Ali: bs kheft enich materthain, wallah makan qa9diiL
Hessa: enzain khala9 bs lat3eedha
Ali: lish 9erty mat7ebeeni a6afrech
Hessa: yooh alii khala9 glt bs lat3eedha
ali: khala9 khala9 7ather yalqunbela

she arrived home, when he was following them all the way from the hotel, she didn’t knew until she closed the door of the car, she noticed him, she entered the house quickly, her mom said: slow it down hessooo lat6e7een w tetkaserain!!
She couldn’t hear her mom becuz she was already on the stairs heading to her room

She kept talking with ali on BBM till its 7 in the morning, then they both said GN and fall asleep….
Weeks passed, nothing is changed……. Until one day, ali fought with Hessa bcuz he wants her to take his permission whenever she wanna go out!!
She didn’t like this decision at all, she told him you're not my parents nor my brother so you have no right to ask me to take your permission… he didn’t know how to let her know about his love, he wanted to tell her that he loves her so bad, but he was more afraid of losing her for good, cuz he knew that the only reason she accepted both, ali and bader, becuz they were a group, and she accepted talking to them becz she needed a big brother, bedal abdulaziz elly mat, bedal abdulmehsen elly 9ar kella bel shareka with his father aw at the gym aw belduwaneya aw eb abdulaziz's room, bedal abdulwahab elly mayadry 3n a7ad ghair rab3a w 6al3eta w wanasta, bedal juju elly bs sha6ra etdager feeha, bedal oboha elly shakla shway w begolaha ana ma7ebich ana mabeech ana bs abee jawharty, bedal omha elly lama el7een 3aysha 3ala thekra abdulaziz, she needed 7anannn so much!!!
Hessa and ali slept this night without saying GN or anything at all, both put the sleeping face in their status, but non did really sleep, they kept thinking for hours………


What were they thinking of???
Will they make up or this is the end of it??
Well he came out for her? will he tell her how he feels about her?
You'll have to comment on this chapter to make me post the next one ;)
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waiting xoxo!!